Here is the context of our first draft for the press release. It incorporates all of the vital information such as the artists participating, the groups names, the title, concept, context. I think it is an excellent portrayal of our exhibition and will give the viewer the perfect insight into what we are trying to achieve within our exhibition. However I do think that the date and artists would work better at the beginning just to give the viewer the main details initially as these are perhaps the most important elements of the press release.
Press Release
Define: Ethereal
- 1.extremely delicate and light in
a way that seems not to be of this world.
- "her ethereal beauty"
- 2.CHEMISTRY (of a solution) having diethyl ether as a solvent.
-"sodium is dissolved in ethereal
solutions of aromatic ketones"
Dusk is
falling,
and the
inner world is
gathering
dust, as reality
passes
by. A protective atmosphere
presides
over the grand structure before you;
a
sleeping giant. Through the Ether, you see a silhouette
rise
through the veil; seemingly impassable. A gap reveals itself
to you,
and you enter. Lights beckon, and out of the gloom,
unusual
treasures come into focus, as if only for you. The
thread
of time is distant from your mind as you spend what feels
like
hours in the space of your own thoughts and memories. A ripple
of
material. A pool of crystallised, glittering, unknown depths.
A bird
watches you. You think you are alone. Shadows on the wall
Are just
your own. But the sound is not you... The Collective
are
proud to reveal ‘Through the Ether’,
a show displaying the
beautiful,
unusual and dreamlike state of mind that the artist makes
physical.
Work on show ranges from the most delicate and otherworldly of
dreams,
to the most chemical, textural of realities, in a space purpose-built. Place
one foot in front of the other and step into the world of the Ethereal.
Jack Marder// Becky Price// Becky
Hadfield// Lucy Orme// Suhkjinder Nahal// Riba Begum// etc.
Alice Macqueen// Amber Sims// Amy Hoult//
Anna Phillips// Bianca Bonvie-Marsland// Domonic Edward// Elizabeth Ilsley//
Emma Ginster// Faith Pallet// Hannah Minchin// Julia Bloomfield// Megan Evans//
Megan Wellings// Nadine Lowe// Raymond Linklater
The Collective would like to thank:
Pieroth Wines// The
Private View Bakers// City of Birmingham RAG Market// Quilter's Club
12th – 14th February 2014